PRE-MAJOR FEEDBACK

The overall feedback seemed to be that the most interesting elements of my pre-major were those that involved working around machines. This work with technology allowed the audience to come up with their own conclusions regarding meaning and intent. My character designs however weren't deemed as an effective solution to my work. Looking back it does seem to be a bit of a tangent and furthermore they are quite generic, due to the simpleness needed for knitting. There are already a lot of plush toys out there. It was mentioned that I need to be more ambitious and critically engaged. Hopefully I will be able to amend this in my major project by reflecting more on my work and looking to others for feedback to get more diverse opinions.